Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

Heart - Poem by Jacqui Broad

My heart must be a
face-cloth: you keep twisting it
till the blood runs dry...

Comments about Heart by Jacqui Broad

  • Harindhar Reddy (11/12/2011 3:12:00 PM)

    Gosh! I can see the pain in your blood veins. But don't twist it yourself. I think your poem is pleading not twist your heart any more...

    Anyhow like in Haiku meaning is hidden. the same is case with this. Your TENDERLING! i say! Be strong and believe yourself! .... Good night...

    May blue in heart flies away! Till then be bold!

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  • Crimson Love (10/19/2011 1:16:00 AM)

    beautiful, short yet your words are filled with lengthy meaning. well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/18/2011 10:23:00 AM)

    Do not allow yourself to be drained, because you are full of life. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 18, 2011

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