All I Want Poem by Jacqui Broad

All I Want

Rating: 2.8


On the wings of your dove I want to fly.
On your shoulder I want to spill tears and cry.
In your loving arms I want to feel wrapped.
In your loving mind I won't feel entrapped.
In your colorful garden I want to walk.
To you I want to talk.
I want you to teach me about love.
So I'm sending a message back with your dove...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 November 2011

You swept the sky with freedom of peaceful mind...The poem, simple with stunning arrangement..it has beautiful words, well what i can say i like this poem very much keep your talent out and paste it on paper! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Silentpoet Grl 11 November 2011

Your words are so beautifully written - a really heart felt poem. Every line is perfect. Truly Wonderful!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 November 2011

'on your shoulder i want to spill tears and cry' well written poem, , , with the most beautiful words...keep them coming sister! ! !

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Jinal Oswal 11 November 2011

O MY GOD! ! ! I am loving this truly.... May God bless you with your wishes.. Keep writing :)

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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

Oh my god! I'm writing something.. wanna say you something... reached... Yes I think he gives you his shoulder - you can cry, you can lay I don't why! Yikes! I think dove carried your message - He has put his hands around you, stay there! Yes! I think he gifted you his mind. I think you are making inroads in his mind forever! Yup! You I think - he is seeing angel in you walking in his garden.... I think he will teach you about love - all the love in the heaven and earth.... Dove is fluttering and i think he is singing a SOLO song but suddenly it turned into a love song..... My name is Harry; I’m falling for you – I’m your Valentine; My love is named Larry; I’m getting flowers for you – my love fountain! Marigold, daisies, rose flowers are too few to amaze my love............. Poet take my smiles and give me life! Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :) Miss you Jacqui... Miss you...

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Federico del Corazón 19 December 2011

Great poem, it reminds me of Rumi and his love poems. Both, spiritually with the one and only true source of love and emotionally charged to seek the one looking for love!

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Kara Towe 28 November 2011

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. <3

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 November 2011

On the wings of your dove I want to fly. On your shoulder I want to spill tears and cry... endearment bestirs to latch on to green of wild heart to mellow embracing gloss of blue, beautiful write being passionate,10+, thanks for sharing

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Eric Cockrell 18 November 2011

very beautiful poem, from a deep and true heart!

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Gordon Tseng 15 November 2011

Good work! And enjoy mine. Fly with Me Fly with me. Why do you just kiss in the dark street? Oh, fly with me. There is more to know though the lips are sweet. Fly with me. Say good-bye to the bees lost in flowers and trees. Oh, fly with me Over the mountains, across the seas. Fly with me Into wherever our minds can see. Oh, fly with me Beyond what our present being seems to be. by Gordon Tseng

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