Jacqui Broad

Rookie - 49 Points (10 Dec '84)

All I Want - Poem by Jacqui Broad

On the wings of your dove I want to fly.
On your shoulder I want to spill tears and cry.
In your loving arms I want to feel wrapped.
In your loving mind I won't feel entrapped.
In your colorful garden I want to walk.
To you I want to talk.
I want you to teach me about love.
So I'm sending a message back with your dove...


Comments about All I Want by Jacqui Broad

  • Federico del CorazónFederico del Corazón (12/19/2011 3:36:00 PM)

    Great poem, it reminds me of Rumi and his love poems. Both, spiritually with the one and only true source of love and emotionally charged to seek the one looking for love! (Report)Reply

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  • Kara Towe (11/28/2011 1:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. <3 (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (11/23/2011 3:37:00 AM)

    On the wings of your dove I want to fly.
    On your shoulder I want to spill tears and cry...

    endearment bestirs to latch on to green of wild
    heart to mellow embracing gloss of blue, beautiful write being passionate,10+, thanks for sharing
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  • Eric Cockrell (11/18/2011 8:40:00 PM)

    very beautiful poem, from a deep and true heart! (Report)Reply

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  • Gordon TsengGordon Tseng (11/15/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    Good work!
    And enjoy mine.


    Fly with Me


    Fly with me.
    Why do you just kiss in the dark street?
    Oh, fly with me.
    There is more to know though the lips are sweet.

    Fly with me.
    Say good-bye to the bees lost in flowers and trees.
    Oh, fly with me
    Over the mountains, across the seas.

    Fly with me
    Into wherever our minds can see.
    Oh, fly with me
    Beyond what our present being seems to be.


    by Gordon Tseng
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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/14/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    Alas! The moment you are joyous for one second - The Immortal lord of destinyate has snatched your mirthfulness and left you paranoid in the Pandemonium (even your harmonium is not with you......)

    Jacqui, Jacqui! Not many words - heart felt condolences and May your loved one rest in peace. A wreath of flowers on his tomb! May he lay there in peace for ever oh eternal god! Help Jacqui to coupe up with bloody situation. With 1001 wishes to be mentally strong!
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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (11/12/2011 9:37:00 PM)

    With one as passionate as you
    surely a dove will come flying back at you
    with a message of love so true
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  • Dave Walker (11/12/2011 8:58:00 AM)

    A great poem about love. A really good write. (Report)Reply

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  • Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (11/12/2011 3:36:00 AM)

    .Wow! :) :) :) Lady Jaqcui i just created an image with some of the ideas of expression you disposed, i realy am amused, ......the poem very cozy. (Report)Reply

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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/11/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    Oh my god! I'm writing something.. wanna say you something... reached...

    Yes I think he gives you his shoulder - you can cry, you can lay I don't why!
    Yikes! I think dove carried your message - He has put his hands around you, stay there!
    Yes! I think he gifted you his mind. I think you are making inroads in his mind forever!

    Yup! You I think - he is seeing angel in you walking in his garden....
    I think he will teach you about love - all the love in the heaven and earth....
    Dove is fluttering and i think he is singing a SOLO song but suddenly it turned into a love song.....

    My name is Harry; I’m falling for you – I’m your Valentine;
    My love is named Larry; I’m getting flowers for you – my love fountain!
    Marigold, daisies, rose flowers are too few to amaze my love.............
    Poet take my smiles and give me life! Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) :)
    Miss you Jacqui... Miss you...
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  • Jinal OswalJinal Oswal (11/11/2011 8:54:00 AM)

    O MY GOD! ! ! I am loving this truly.... May God bless you with your wishes.. Keep writing :) (Report)Reply

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  • Siyabonga A Nxumalo (11/11/2011 5:44:00 AM)

    'on your shoulder i want to spill tears and cry' well written poem, , , with the most beautiful words...keep them coming sister! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Silentpoet Grl (11/11/2011 4:00:00 AM)

    Your words are so beautifully written - a really heart felt poem. Every line is perfect. Truly Wonderful! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (11/11/2011 3:45:00 AM)

    You swept the sky with freedom of peaceful mind...The poem, simple with stunning arrangement..it has beautiful words, well what i can say i like this poem very much keep your talent out and paste it on paper! :) _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, November 11, 2011


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