A lover sees his beloved
Hands in hands
Merry like a singing bird
Gives nothing but pain
May still be some relief
If his heart has belief
Not with me but is glad
With her hero, fantasy lad
Yes it hurts but little
Now think of moment
When two hearts meet
Love little errors of each
Find heaven when together
Beloved opens her heart
And Says,
Look! It needs you
Incomplete it is,
Only you can complete
Both have love in hearts
Both know it always be
But
It never was, never is, never will be
POSSIBLE
Pain pure pain Pals….
In a heart apparently complete
Most love poems are cliche and really cheesey (which is why I TRY to avoid writing them) , but this one stands out and feels real. I like it a lot.: D
Both have love in hearts Both know it always be But It never was, never is, never will be POSSIBLE so true...sometimes we are compelled to do so...but love never ends...it has no limits
Welcome Poet to the Broken Hearts Club! ! Muito Lindo and touching! ! ! ! !
Simple but brilliant love expression... Some times very serene feel and some times it never was, never is, never will be POSSIBLE Pain pure pain Pals…. In a heart apparently complete its really a realistic love poem....
great and sweet love complaint........... sometimes such love are sweeter than fulfilled one......... love is love when long for........... and you have depict it with great skill....... these lines are very poignant, Beloved opens her heart And Says, Look! It needs you Incomplete it is, Only you can complete Both have love in hearts Both know it always be But It never was, never is
As genuine as the words from the mouth of a love analyst! The other experiences are the impacts of colossal ignorance perhaps. You have done it the way things are tutored to the young. Keep writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
whenever i read your poem it is like i am listing to a romantic song....they always keeps me stuck you are brilliant sir