Lara W.A

Heaven - Poem by Lara W.A

Don’t leave, Heaven
Don’t go, Sanity
Please stay
I want to live
One more day

People are laughing
I’m trying not to wonder
What makes the world go round?

Pride – Don’t walk out on me
You’re the only one thing
I have left.

Comments about Heaven by Lara W.A

  • (6/20/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    Brilliant in every way! Write more... (Report) Reply

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  • (6/28/2005 11:17:00 AM)

    Yes, I liked that last stanza, too. It is a really good, neat ending to the poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2005 4:05:00 AM)

    Wow! the last paragraph was perfectly penned! well done! !
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  • Linda Hepner (6/23/2005 1:44:00 PM)

    Pride isn't the only thing left in your life! Submit to Nature! You have all sorts of unexpected and glorious things ahead, with or without Heaven and with or without understanding what makes the world tick! Go with it and write more! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 22, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2005

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