Heaven Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Heaven

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Heaven is a captivating word, it is on high
Each person imagines, it can't sea with eye
Actually we say good qualities as heaven or shiva
Vexation is absent here no fear of shiv
Eagerly and fairly do like a busy bee
Nicely you can get heaven do with keen

Thursday, June 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First capital letter and last letter of each line spells a word heaven.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 June 2017

A good spiritual acrostic explained with caption. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2017

Like a busy bee! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hazel Durham 06 October 2018

A very clever piece of writing and heaven is captivating and life is many things but living with love, truth and kindness lessens the hard knocks of life! Great write!

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Valsa George 11 October 2019

We can only visualize Heaven and we take it to be a place of perfect bliss. It cannot be seen with our naked eyes. But the very hope of Heaven helps us brave all hardships of the world and we live in the hope of reaching a heaven of all joy at the end of life. A captivating write!

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Isabel Pimentel 31 October 2020

Heaven is not imagined but this is a reality. God builds it through transformation.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 June 2022

Hope this time all of my comments will show.....

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Rebecca Navarre 14 June 2022

Such Beauty and heart Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 June 2022

Beauty and heart Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 June 2022

Beauty and Heart Beyond #ing! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 June 2022

That God longs to share with all! .. Peace, beauty and kindness beyond what we can dream! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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