Hello Boys! Poem by Ernestine Northover

Hello Boys!

Rating: 4.9


Hello Boys! She drawled with a low sexy voice,
Swinging her foot onto a chair,
Her skirt separated and was showing her thighs,
Which caused all the 'fellas' to 'stare'!

She shimmered with sequins and sparkled with jewels,
Bright feathers adorning her hair,
She was totally outrageous and larger then life,
Their 'passions' were starting to 'flare'!

She slowly leant over, her bosom immense,
Singing out 'I'm Delectable Lil',
Their faces ecstatic, their eyes popping out,
She whispered 'I'll give you a thrill'!

She flirted and fluttered her eyelashes then,
Wiggling hips that just had to be seen,
When suddenly they realised with utter dismay,
She was in fact, a fantastic 'drag queen'!

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter A. Crowther 19 October 2005

Must have been a bit of a let-down! Very funny poem well written

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Simon Whild 22 October 2005

A very complelling poem Ernestine. A nice twist at the end, which reminded me of the movie 'The Crying Game'.

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Sallie Howson 23 October 2005

such a surprising end..i loved it..very funny

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Daniel Tyler 26 October 2005

A great twist at the end of a very amusing poem. I could imagine it being used for the Carry On Films! Sincerely Daniel

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Derek Mccasland 27 October 2005

Very funny. lol Even before the twist. It reminds me of some twisted nursery rhyme. Love it.

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Kevin Wells 15 March 2009

I think I went out with her once! ...Never have been that Lucky. Nice work with a nice twist in the tale.

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Stone Granite 16 June 2008

As in real life, I winch at the recognition of what was before me. My eyes wide, my desire stirred, at the fore, only to cringe in spite of myself at the latter. Awesome job!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 May 2008

as a boy me self, i kom to realise that this fascinate me self.beauty piece alright.

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Andrew Blakemore 26 April 2008

I got really turned on until I read the last line. That will teach me! Andrew x

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Chuck Audette 10 August 2006

oh ho! too funny! I bet that de-flated their egos a bit! -chuck

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