HELLO …..HELLO....
frog is away from falling bridge
lest it may suffer creases of fall
as it jumps over the fall by mirth
cry of falling rebounds the frog
we laugh loud by our own dwarf shadows
lest shadow may enroll us in livid grime
light still burns shadow even in eclipse
semblance swaddles across dwarfism
grace eclectic rumbles by grimace
as thought elastic ambles in green
ocean stoops over blue being deep
frog still resounds grin beneath green
tear saddles faster by sorrow
night breaths deep in apprehension
beauty of love entices upon blue
I or you call me always hello, hello.....! ! !
You are always to be commended for your rich use of simile and metaphor. From your window on the world, you see images of amazing originality. Excellent, Dr. Kar. Giving you 10 is a pleasure. Warm regards, Sandra
Hi, a well written poem. Some sense of humour in it. Liked it much. Take care.
I especially love the use of colors in the poem. Very beautiful, start to finish.: } 10! !
I like this tear of green sadness, so subtly visible in the ocean of blue life.wonderful poem...10+++
A very nice poem written in excellence...with a simple title though have a very deep mening and context...crafted with zeal...10+++
Your frog entrances, your use of color hypnotizes, your love of language is par excellence. Yes, indeed. Your poetry fascinates. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written. Thanks for sharing your talent!