Help Me Poem by Cynthia Carpenter

Help Me

Rating: 3.8


stuck in this life I'm liven
to you, my heart I'm given
i stand an cry through the rain
please Lord rid me of this pain
i wish to be released of this hurt, i wish it away
i promised you first, that i would stay
help me lord, set me free
let me live a new life, let there be a new me
rid me lord of this sorrow
let there be a brighter day tomorrow

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
all the hurt an pain in my life, in church is where i wrote it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 05 February 2014

'rid me lord of this sorrow let there be a brighter day tomorrow' What is your sorrow? Why do you seek darkness?

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Bright Morn 05 December 2013

may u get all what u want. nice poem keep writing

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 December 2013

very nice.but if you dont have pain you cant enjoy happiness.nice ink though.keep inking.

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Bright Morn 05 December 2013

may u get all what u want. nice poem keep writing

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Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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