Her Keys Poem by ONElia AVElar

Me thinkest you have directed well.... if that other brain of his can't follow those instructions... toss the keys away....10tacles wrap this one up! !

A tactile write - knowing which keys to press - clever composition here Onelia. justine.

Said it before. Need to say it again. Clever girl. t x

oh what a beauty embossing yet emblazoned by the key when no need of shift or caps lock but the sweet home beneath the scroll look..............superb write, quite smooching, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Very clever Onelia! I think all men need to have a think about this one! LOL! Good poem, much fun! HG: -) xx

I like that Onelia, very much!

LOL! ! ! this is VERY naughty Onelia! ! ! Laughing at this cheeky post. Well done you: -) xx

I love your ironic take on love, Onelia! I found myself laughing aloud at the last few lines of this poem! After all if the Elizabethans could use the garden as a metaphor for love, why shouldn't the twentieth century poet use the computer keyboard for the same purpose! Men spend more time at computers than in gardens and the mastery of IT is a good parallel for the mastery of the art of making love, for many men! x Jan

An interesting poem with IT image that is contemporary approach.10 for this.

Motherly breast: at the sources of sexuality. Our poet describes very well the starting point and a stretch of our pathway.