Her Thirst ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Her Thirst ♥

Rating: 5.0


When the first drop of rainwater falls on her,
Hear the music hear the shout,
See the joy and the smell like the liberated souls,
Actinomycete bacteria crawling in air,
Lifts up my body, mind to unlimited scale.

Her Thirst   ♥
Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,rain drops
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When first few raindrops fall on earth, the smell, the joy and the sound is really amazing, joy for eyes, ears and nose.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 31 October 2015

Superb poem,........

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2015

See the joy of life! ! And, feel the ways of nature. Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2015

Beautiful thirst minimizes on first falling of first rain drop. So interesting poem shared really. Nice and wonderful...10

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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2015

Wow.... You have beautifully captured the magic of the first drop of rain accompanied by 'the joy and the smell like the liberated souls'. Great poem.

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