Here Again...! Comments

evolving the question haunts us..............beautiful write..................

An excellent poem Indira. It seems you jumped a ten 'yozana' distance in a single effort in poetics. Profound and the end is just stunning.....reminding some of our Telugu greats.

An exquisite piece with some exceptional use of metaphors. A perfect 10. Pls do read my An Almanac Of My Being which is on a similar theme, though not half as good as this one.

'Sleep slips into regular folds'! What a brilliant line. The poem manages to combine the spiritual and the mundane with originality and a great feel for language. There is also a wry sort of angst which comes across loud and clear. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

All more out of habit Rachel Ann Butler

sadness rampant in the poem

How sad Indira, where life is emptiness find fulfillment, joy living each day, don't waste a gift so precious each day... Andy 10

ha, this one made me smile...for I know that feeling...the rattling of bones in an empty sack....!

This is a stunning if sad piece Indira You better watch outBabbellapati I could easily become a fan. Paddy

phew! that anyone can create such imagery is beyond my comprehension. i am left utterly speechless ma'am! awesome. thank you.

should i say, poetic height of self-rejection....? ? ? but, stunning, indira.....

A good poetic reflection of life! 10! -Raj

i guess it's as empty as you wish it to be...the universe is empty and so are we but the life, the energy in us gives meaning to life...let us enjoy this energy...this gift...for one day it will be taken away from us...thanks you for this lovely poem

life is indeed like that eh.. they say the universe moves towards disorder.. tis true.

Professor Babbellapati...Stunning work! Your darting penchant for inventive depiction, an may be only superseded by your natural acumen for structural lay-out..As a rule i do not read bio's, but i read yours today, and it was no surprise to learn what you do for a living....Want a new student? F j R

the creation changes side on its celestial bed, and another day slips out......like nothing new! ! ! ! ! ! ! Well composed...thanks IndirajI! ! ! !