Hidden Love Poem by Sandhya S.N

Hidden Love

Rating: 5.0


Feel that! feel, with your heart
The feel! The passion of real love

Don’t long for those words to sound;
It may sometimes swap away
Away by storm and hurl it hard
And wither away in nasty wind

Don’t long for those written words;
It may sometimes get wash away
Away by rain to abate it’s bold
And fade away in sea ripples

But, hear! Here from my heart
The feel! The passion of my love
Which I kept hidden from the sun
The rain and the vicious wild storm

Sandhya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 07 July 2009

ammmmazing articulation! fine! ....10+

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Adi Cox 06 July 2009

I like the way you set this poem out. The way that you relate sound to the wind and writing to water. A poem about the way in which you protect the passion in your heart from the unforgiving world. This is a poem that must surely relate to anyone with a heart. Nice poem.10/10.

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Surya . 04 July 2009

great love. sound feelings. hidden heart.wonderful poem voted10 surya

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premji premji 02 July 2009

hidden love is a thorn within...........

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

beautiful.. the precious love hidden from sun and and... inviting to hear.. but not easy to hear.. but we can feel it... with heart... passion of real love.. sandhya.. well done..-Jaleel

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Shihabudheen K J 22 November 2011

Nice poem.hearts feelings does not sound but can one feel.you said it.will you read my poem 'naked souls'and comment.

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Shihabudheen K J 22 November 2011

Nice poem.hearts feelings does not sound but can one feel.you said it.will you read my poem 'naked souls'and comment.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2010

But, hear! Here from my heart The feel! The passion of my love Which I kept hidden from the sun The rain and the vicious wild storm The passion of love that you had hidden till now.. nice poem. full of passion

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Ted M 14 August 2009

But, hear! Hear from my heart The feel! The passion of my love ****** can sense strong feelings and passion, very original............10+++

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Pandian Angelina 19 July 2009

Love may not be expressable sometimes when the situations and circumstances may make the outward words spoken or written seem harsh. But, true love will find its own - When felt by another loving heart - feelings never betray us as may words. Well expressed and well conveyed in the constructing inhospitable conditions and the true passion of love passionately felt and written too! Angel

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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