Hidden Message Poem by Shaun Cronick

Hidden Message

Rating: 5.0


I think I'll write a bad poem tonight,
I guess there's no change there then.
What I seek to discover is a good idea,
Then write it wretchedly with my pen.

A good idea to drain of bright colour,
A good idea to swamp and drown.
For I've a bad reputation to keep up,
And the world of poetry to let down.

Yes, a good idea to overflow with words,
To suffocate the real message intended.
But if people read between its lines,
They'll see a poem so very open-ended...

Saturday, June 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hiding,messages
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 06 June 2020

your topic always various, even some times you are writing very honest about the techniques of writing poem as well! I congratulate you for your amazing talent and skill, keep writing and stay blessed 10/10 as usual

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Shaun Cronick 10 June 2020

I believe everybody Soran should write what they feel with an open and honest mind and heart. If not, they cheat and hoodwink their own poetry soul. Thank you for your kind comments and you too good sir stay blessed and healthy.

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Soran M. H 06 June 2020

Yes, a good idea to overflow with words, To suffocate the real message intended. But if people read between its lines, They'll see a poem so very open-ended...

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Shaun Cronick 10 June 2020

Than you Soran for taking your time to read and appraise.

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