She was a high school slinger
Six times winner. She's the
dame of all the books that you'd read
She'd rub against your shoulder
Oh so much bolder, you'd hang on
everything that she said
You'd never see slimmer
But she craved to be thinner
Those magazines really got to her head
Face painted pale,
Her tonsils' evil blare
She made sure that she always got heard
She's a Ballroom swinger
Kareoke singer. She's the epitimy
of all that I dread
Her face a bit older,
A heart getting colder
How will you ever get fed?
Now she's a real Hum-dinger
A fiesty city minger
There's one thing you'll have to accept
On her roads to decieve
She still spreads her disease
Never leaving a heart unbled
So don't try to win her
Till you learn how to sting her
You'll be sleeping in an empty bed
For she'll take all your money
Then run to her Mummy
And leave you with a hole in your head
She's a Ballroom swinger Kareoke singer. She's the epitimy of all that I dread Her face a bit older, A heart getting colder How will you ever get fed? Now she's a real Hum-dinger A fiesty city minger There's one thing you'll have to accept On her roads to decieve She still spreads her disease Never leaving a heart unbled.................. Its really heart warming. Excellent juxtaposition. WELL DONE.
I really like the way you put this together. It is easy to read and well it just takes all kinds to make the World go round.....very nice
Now.....surely you must know....the makings...of a good woman. The future is yours!
Wonderful....very pleasing rhythm....great write..10+++++
Very well expressed! Thanks! best regards, joan d.h.
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I would like to translate this poem
Thank you. I love 'Slinger', what a word, new to me! The poem is bursting at the seams, feels like its going to explode, but it holds.Great, thanks.