His Lovely Lady Poem by Sandra Martyres

His Lovely Lady

Rating: 5.0


Dark almond shaped eyes
Delicately shaped eye brows
Long brown eye lashes
A flawless skin
and her perfect face
She carries herself
with enormous grace
He is indeed obsessed
with his beauteous love
Each time she passes him
He stares back at her
in sheer agony
He wants to hold her in his arms
Reassure her that with him
She has nothing to fear
As he will always remain beside her
To love, protect and guard her
But he have been warned
That the slightest hint
of any advances
Would absolutely
ruin his chances
To win her over he needs
to wait patiently
Until she decides
to reach out to him
But inspite of her
seemingly indifferent nature
He still craves this beauteous creature
So will someone tell his lovely lady,
That her silence is killing him

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is very different Sandra and filled with intrigue and mystique. Who is she, do tell. Maybe it may be a sequel. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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Naidz Ladia 17 June 2009

my goshhhhhhhhhh...this is finely done...hope this lovely lady is meee...lolz.. i guess this lovely lady is as pretty as me am just jokin dear sandy.. smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...naizz

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Meggie Gultiano 17 June 2009

glad that i am not a lovely lady..I might be the cause of his agony..LOL this is lovely indeed.. Hugs, meggie

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 14 June 2009

how lucid this love poem is! i twise read.10

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Indira Babbellapati 11 June 2009

matters as these can't hang in uncertainities, can they?

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Ted M 27 August 2009

Vow! Gorgeous, attractive, deadly! Does she have a name? Pen in hand you turn into a Magician creating a magic which is amazing, beautiful, attractive. I'm feeling dizzy, my mind is still spinning. after the first part.....Not voting as 10 is not enough for this brilliance.

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Siddharth Singh 14 July 2009

Such profound feelings going unnoticed is sad!

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Sandra Fowler 21 June 2009

Romantic, vivid and compelling. Perhaps, as Karin suggests, there will be a sequel.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 21 June 2009

Success goes to those who dare... a good descriptive write, Sandra...well formatted lines conveying your story there...10

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Fiona Davidson 20 June 2009

Brilliant images jump form the page here Sandra...excellent piece...Fi 10+++

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