Hollow Man Poem by Bill Cantrell

Hollow Man

Rating: 5.0


Chip on his shoulder
No strings for his shoes
Wife is working dawn to dusk,
While he sits home singing blues
Always feeling chipper,
When the weekend comes around
Yet, when it's time for working,
His body's broken down
Stays up watching late late shows,
At lunch, he wakes from sleep
He leaves his wife a pyramid,
Of dishes in the sink
With grace he buys her roses,
With the money that she's saved,
She says she's just too tired to cook,
He says, you need a maid

Hollow Man
Saturday, November 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not about men who can't work, just about those who can but are too lazy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 18 December 2018

Great write but I am sure there are Hollow Women too.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 18 November 2018

Funny poem, Bill, cleverly written. I recently heard about such a man whose wife brought up three daughters in the Truth, and is still with him. Saint: -)

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Aqua Flower 17 November 2018

And there is many of men like that unfortunately! A very fitting title to this poem!

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