A Greater Peace Poem by Bill Cantrell

A Greater Peace

Rating: 4.6

With wings of gold,
I touch the light,
What a joy to feel so high
Yet, gliding above,
My darkest fears,
I still hear the others cry
It is only when,
I feel their pain,
I shed my wings of gold
Somehow I find a greater peace,
Standing with them in the cold

A Greater Peace
Friday, January 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

A powerful and wonderful poem full of kindness. Feeling the pain of others and helping them to ease such pain is the most wonderful feeling and I think it is the greatest peace. A great poem that touches the heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2019

I agree with the wonderful comments of Jez Brul and Aqua Flower. Only a good heart can feel the pain of others. And kindness is the core of great character. Wonderfully written.

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you my friend for your reading and commenting, I truly appreciate it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2019

You have beautifully perceived natural beauty and expressed brilliantly in this excellent poem. Golden wings touch light but snow falls on it and later melts. Others cry for peace and you hear. This really provokes thought. Standing within cold still you find greater peace. An excellent poem is well penned....10

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Bill Cantrell 14 January 2019

Thank you my friend Kumarmani, I do like my poetry to provoke though

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 April 2022

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant... wonderful poetry!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2021

A great poem my friend! Well penned.

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Mustafa Bellek 26 February 2021

Nice Poem

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Nice 26 February 2021

Nice poem

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Rebecca Navarre 06 February 2021

And Thank you for always having been so kind to me! ..

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