Honeybunch Poem by Rini Shibu

Honeybunch

Rating: 4.2


He works hard to get attention
Walks behind but never mention
Your presence make him a poet
Nervous but you will never know it
Accepts you for your quirks
And Love all your works
He  enjoys  your achievements
But never show excitement
He will build all your  dream
Give you pleasure till you scream
Takes you to a different world
Move with you in rhythmic swirl

Sunday, May 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2017

A different shade of love Jerry. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 18 May 2017

Thank u jazib

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Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

A very romantic piece filled with passion!

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Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

A poem that is romantically inclined.+++10

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Lamar Cole 19 June 2017

Very romantic poem filled with passion.

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Rini Shibu 19 June 2017

Thanks to a romantic poet

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Siddartha Montik 06 June 2017

Very Sensual..! Loved it! and again wonderfully subtle expressions! ! sweet to read! a definite 10++! !

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Rini Shibu 06 June 2017

Thanks Siddhartha....

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 May 2017

Hi Rini, Nice poem. A tinge of sensuousness: He will build all your dream Give you pleasure till you scream Takes you to a different world Move with you in rhythmic swirl Beautiful work. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 27 May 2017

Thank you... :)

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