Hope In My Heart Will Never Die.......... Poem by emo girl

Hope In My Heart Will Never Die..........

Rating: 3.7


If my life is a big horrible lie....................
If my little bird will never get to fly..............
If the smoky clouds have never left the sky......
If my grade had never been high...............
If my only lover said Goodbye.........
If he refused to give us a chance to try..........
If I could never overcome the fact of being so shy...........
If all poor countries would never have any food supply...........

and every one kept asking......
why? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
each of us has become a dangerous big Spy.............

If I have always been so emotional
and any thing would easly make me cry.......

all what I can say..............
with a deep sigh.......and a tearful eye......................

Hope in my heart will never die................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paulina Vacas 24 July 2008

actually it works better as a song

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... Lynch 12 August 2007

A beautiful heartfelt poem. Holds a lot of truth. I like it. -Kylie M. Lynch

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bravo! *claps for emo girl* that was beautiful! i liked it! ima give it a 10!

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Sofia Moreno 14 August 2007

WOW! ! ! ! It's awesome! You're wonderful! Don't worry abour being shy. Everyone has fears inside. Thanks, Sofia.

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Dav Y. 31 October 2007

wow, thats really awesome. and really dont worry about being shy, your great and thats what counts.: D dav.

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Zintle 17 April 2018

I loved the poem hope in my heart will never die

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Iron Panda 23™ 08 January 2010

i like this ALOT! ! ^-^

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Hailie Workman 26 December 2008

this is a really good poem. i enjoyed it a lot. but i noticed that in your poems you tend to use a lot of puntuation. its kinda distracting, maybe you should tone it down a bit

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Juxtaposed Jealousy 04 December 2008

you remind me of John Clare. you have your own style and own way of...punctuating it and spelling. obviously you don't care to follow many of the rules, which necessarily, isn't a bad thing. Unique. Keep up the poetry works.: ] everyone appreciates a good literary work.

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Hope is always there.Pandora left in her box.There is a silver lining in every cloud and love conquors all bad things.Best wishes

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