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Jules Joaquin 07 April 2008

Wow. I guess you really have lots of friends on MySpace.

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MARCI MADE 18 May 2008

There is so much emotion in your poems. I hope you write some more. Obviously you're networked well in your school or country and you deserve to be. Meggie.

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Ben Toh La Wok 25 May 2008

I think I like YOU....there's a certain sweetness there....but I'm unsure as to where I stand on the poetry....I'm not a fan of structured poetry that adheres strictly to ryhme schemes etc. and yours aren't that...but I don't know, I just find it simplistic and repetitive sometimes....having said that, I find it to be really alive.....you have confused me emo girl.I'm jealous of your popularity....maybe I'm lashing out :)

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Jasmine Wallace 05 June 2008

Lovely poems, such passion in them

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Pyro Fennema 08 July 2008

Darkness consumes, Darkness obtains, The reason why we are in tombs. Or stuck in the rain. Another soul like me. All captured, none are free. Your work touches me. Stuck in the darkness, No chance to flee. The truth is i admire you, You have lit my flame anew. And the only thing I can give you. Is a good luck, and a thank you

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Karina The Cat 24 November 2009

i like this poem. its KINDA like me lol.

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Joe Gavin 14 April 2009

hey, ur poems are relly good, especially my dearest soulmate, if u get an opportunity, could you have a read of one of mine? thanks and well done on great poetry

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beautiful words....very...

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Rated GothEmoHippyRebelMe 17 December 2008

Hei I happened to read this and i enjoyed it. I ask almost everybody this but what inspired you to make this poem or song up?

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Hunter Dasten 19 November 2008

I'm not sure how you managed to become number 1 in popularity here on poemhunter but well done. The only question I have is, why so many periods? Almost every line seems to end in '..............' is your period key sticky? did you spill something in there? Just curious. Take Care, -Hunter Dasten

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The Best Poem Of emo girl

Alone

Sitting alone.......
in my dark creepy room..........
and that abhorrent feeling
is eating my soul.................

It really hurts
when you feel you are alone...............
still waiting..
for some one to come and knock your door...........
or even give you a call...............
still waiting..
for someone to help you through it all....
still waiting..
for someone who can prevent the fall of your soul...........

I cant understand
people anymore...........
and i have adesire
to crush them all...............

I want to fly to another palce
that is safe.....and warm......
where i can find a friend to tell me:
never frown...............
cause you are not a lone.........anymore...
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