That day when you said: good bye my lover..
that hurtful word was killing me inside..
Oh my love.......I'm in tears days and nights..
Oh my love.......I'm living acreepy life......
Oh my love........you've left agirl with abroken heart..
Oh my love.......I'm bursting to tell you how much i miss you..
Oh my love..can you hear me? .......
or the long distance between us has deafened you..........
this poem is amking me cry it reminds me of mi ex and all the lies he once told me... we sweared eternal love but he left me nine months ago heartbroken, , i tried something but i wasn't succesfull thanks to mi mom im alive! ! ! !
wow...i like this...reminds me of my past relationship
You're not alone in this boat emo girl........Keep writing, it helps..........marci.xo
Quite sad but romantic though. Many can relate to it and myself too.
A beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
i'd like to read a poem of yours written in different perspective.
beautiful art from deep in your heart.
The oh my love's sort of bring it all into a nice flowing peice. I like it
oh im so sorry......i know its hard. but you have 2 have faith and never give up. ill be praying 4 you. saty strong and never give up. im here if you need a friend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Awww... Hurtfull... It reminds me of a situation/event last Christmas! i call it CHRISTMAS HEARTBREAK! ! ! well anyway, thanks! ^_^ ei EMO GIRL, what's your real name? (if you don't mind, just send me a private mail here in poemhunter) -GanNi