My Dearest Soulmate Poem by emo girl

My Dearest Soulmate

Rating: 4.2


I will never forget you my dearest soulmate..
these old meomries will never fade...
you've always laid me in your shade...
whenever I trembled or felt afraid....
and raised me up when I failed..
you've taught me how to overcome the sadness
and put and end to all that hate....

Do you remember all the games that we've played? ....
all the moments we have shared....
the unfolded visions we used to paint...
and even when it rained
our eyes have always met and blazed.......
to challenge all the eyebrows that were raised........

and the promise you have made
to stick with me in any country or far away state....

tell me how can I have the will to evade
all the dreams that we've always shared? .......

But now I'm sooooo faint...........
falling apart behind you like a pale lifless blade.......
cause am being always chased....
by all the precious moments that we've shared...
and my cruise has never sailed...
still there waiting to be saved...
by the eyes who have alwyas claimed...
and reflected the truth that I'm the only girl to be praised...

so please reach out for me and offer some aid...
to a heart broken girl who has always prayed....
to be blessed with the fate...
of seeing you once again before it gets too late......

my dearest soulmate..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 30 January 2008

so beautiful and heartfelt poem

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Daniel Wheeler 27 March 2008

I loved it. even gave it a 10 in rating. i think it was awesome. i like the lifeless blade part alot.

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Abdelmajid Seghir 23 March 2008

hi emo! i guess you were right this one is really great i like it keep on

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Geovanni Leaño 10 February 2008

Nice poem! i like it! ^_^ no wonder you're the top two 'famous' poets here! i tell you that you're one of those few promising poets out there! ^_^ oh btw, if you're going to ask me, i think i've fallen for your personality ^_^ so dont call yourself EMO GIRL... maybe LADY INNOCENT suits you best... ;) i'm looking forward on your new poems! if you dont mind, i would appreciate it if you visit my poems too... I'm looking forward to be your friend! -Ganni

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Anonymous *plz comment! * 30 January 2008

i love it! ! its a great poem

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A poem that reveals the dexterity of the poet in poem writing!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 March 2022

Despite the few spelling mistakes, this is a very sweet love poem for a soulmate.

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