Hope To Be Happy Poem by Jim Norausky

Hope To Be Happy

Rating: 5.0


Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.

I sure think of it a lot.

Better, better I hope.

Another day, nope.

But I keep dreaming,

Everyday seeming,

Tomorrow maybe, maybe not.

When it happens, to be sure,

I'll be happy, that's the lure.

(June 11,2008, Katy, Texas)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well, the best way is not to hope for anything and take your life the way it is... 'be what may'... great write :)

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Kevin Wells 13 June 2008

Interesting style, Jim. Let's see some more.

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JoAnn McGrath 15 June 2008

Got to have faith and hope to make it: O)

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John Mccudden 21 January 2009

Hi jim i like this gets to the point hope or not well might be or not. yes i like it nice peice of work

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Surayya Abbas 02 June 2009

very powerful message.Hope is life.

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There is a great message in this poem Jim. I like the way you have spaced it out, as it works really well, also the rhyme adds to its effect. 'I'll be happy that's the lure, I will be dam happy that's the cure.' 10/10 Karin Anderson

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Rita Shay 06 February 2009

Wow. Now this is a good poem! I can completely relate to this. Hope is such a wonderful thing. You've probably read it, but if you haven't I'm sure you'd enjoy Emily Dickens' ' Hope is the thing with feathers'

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Michaela Tatualla 02 February 2009

simply fantastic! lovely!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 January 2009

hope has been pictured in hopeful language. shan

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