Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 99,616 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Hot Roll - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Go on pressing me as much as you can,
you are decreasing my per unit volume,
now I am dense enough,
I have a definite weight,
press me more,
give me a definite shape,
and will you please press me more?
Make me a solid,
increase my per unit weight,
thanks.
Now I am firmly standing on the earth!
Don't commit a blunder,
if you press me any more,
I shall become a vast sheet,
that will wrap all you have,
you face, your body and your silky legs
you will be turned in a Hot Roll,
and I don't want to see you as a Hot Roll.
I love you sweetheart!

(Message of someone too weak)

Topic(s) of this poem: weakness


Comments about Hot Roll by Akhtar Jawad

  • Bri Edwards (10/31/2016 9:23:00 PM)


    you face, your body and your silky legs.............ha ha i think you want your face ;)

    you will be turned in a Hot Roll, mmmmaybe into a Hot Roll.

    did the speaker start as a gas? then went to liquid? then solid? a most interesting turn of events!

    and i don't see the topic as weakness. seems 'silky legs' is pretty STRONG to be able to do all that!

    a tasty treat, whether a human partner or a 'sandwich'.

    yum, yum. i think sweetheart AND you are two lucky people.

    bri ;)
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  • Hazel Durham (12/15/2015 11:17:00 AM)


    Pressing the spirit out of people happens when we are at our most vulnerable, great wisdom in this wonderful write! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/12/2015 7:30:00 AM)


    Pressing the hot roles again and again is very fantastic with expression of this wise poem. Sharing love to sweet heart through roll poem is wise and interesting. Amazing.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2015



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