How Long? Poem by Konjit Berhane

forever. time is a curse when it moves fast when we are ar our happiest and drags when we are miserable.

I liked this...the questions seem simple but aren't really...My only suggestion is that all your rhymes are really strong except the minute/faint lines....Just a thought. I don't usually write rhyming stuff so....what do I know, right? But I do think this a good one that just needs a tiny tweak. :)

Wise questions, most likely a very long time.

Ooooh! How long I wonder! ! I love it when poems make me think - this one certainly did! Moyax

As Long as it takes Love dave xxxx

Konjit, Now this one does strike me as maudlin. However that doesn't take away the fact that this is a beautiful work. Denis Joe

A beautiful poem, which is both simple and deep - a rare acheivment. Regards David

This is quite beautiful Konjit....it's simple and complex at the same time and I normally don't like questions in poetry but these ones weren't bashing me on the head :)