poet sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

**********how Long The Dream Can Dance

Her questiion- 'Anything wrong? ' He didn't answer but in his mind the song- 'I love you' all the day.
Singing or thinking or sinking……
The function- two sort,
Within - soundless, wordless that silence witness.
The other is expression which can't cover all inside 'Ah' and 'Oh',
Wrenching!
The dream dancing!
Things in the offing similar to a tender touch of dearest one who can produce cheers any time any where; or can be matched up to- so long yearning end, a piece of time come out from spacetime to build a castle for rhythmic meeting…..
For long period thirsty get water- staggering union, wave upon wave! Gorgeous!

Charmer he, farmer he, flowers love him at first sight, say- 'hi sweet bell esprit! '. Very easily can talk with green nature where birds tell him love story but he is inept to say her 'I love you'!
She is waiting- he would say- 'I love you my dear! ' or ‘You the one for me for ever.’
They are living within each other though reside away far. How long the dream can dance nobody knows….
Lovers always want- 'Be only mine'. O honest….. shine you shine, your fine! Just do not use for nothing all over love thine.

Is it true always that love breeds love? Why waves are elating for the time being? Ah! Ever if they get into….

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 10, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/6/2009 2:58:00 PM)

    ‘Is it true always that love breeds love? ’

    Multi-polar answer: yes no both or nothing and relative.
    Ten++
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • Seema GuptaSeema Gupta (9/23/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    how true......amezing thoughts ya.

    regards

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  • Mubeen SadhikaMubeen Sadhika (8/16/2009 4:07:00 AM)

    Graceful narration. Repeatedly lingering in mind.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/26/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    Is it true always that love breeds love? Why waves are elating for the time being? Ah! Ever if they get into….... love breeds love andhate breeds hate...... beautiful write dear...10

    leave mine o, mother and papa do u knwo and papa u too

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  • Gargi Saha (1/7/2009 11:37:00 AM)

    WELL WRITTEN.
    U GET 10++++++++++...........

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  • Karol Valencia (12/17/2008 2:25:00 PM)

    that was really good......it's so true.how do u come up with ur poems?

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  • Raihana Abdul JabbarRaihana Abdul Jabbar (12/16/2008 5:31:00 AM)

    yes.....this is truth...love breeds love.....i love this poem....it has a quaint charm...10

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  • Viola Grey (12/15/2008 5:41:00 PM)

    I'm not sure I agree that 'love breeds love'....but that's is the beauty of poetry, it's our soul we put on the paper and we all have our own way of seeing things....nice work

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (12/14/2008 2:25:00 AM)

    flowers love him at first sight...
    love breeds love...
    Stunning love poem, thanks for sharing 10

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  • Sarvesh Kulkarni (12/13/2008 4:30:00 AM)

    wow....loved this poem.....
    amazingly composed.....words echo their emotions very well sir...thank you.

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  • Naru Kaede (12/13/2008 1:22:00 AM)

    This is a great poem!
    Problem between the man and the woman,
    Woman it's always need explicitness from man, they always want to be respect,
    But some man usually can't make it true, sometime they just silence and choose
    To talk when the perfect time is come, but woman it's always impatient, , ,
    I just can smile when read this, you can truly understand what the problem,

    Good penned, Regard,
    Naru Kaede, ,

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  • Linda Moore (12/13/2008 12:05:00 AM)

    This is an interesting poem, I like it very much as to How long the Dream can Dance is debatable. Love can last forever but a woman may only wait for a while for you to declare yourself if she wants a family. Men have a much longer window of opportunity to become a parent. Love is always a risk.....10

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  • Seema Aarella (12/12/2008 9:16:00 PM)

    wow..a dancing dream it is indeed! The dual nature of a lover's emotions, that thrives to show itself...but still silently yearns inside! A beautiful picture of the lover's internal dilemma......10 from me sarwar!

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  • Linda WinchellLinda Winchell (12/12/2008 10:31:00 AM)

    Not my style of poetry but very beautiful words indeed. More like a letter. Ten, Linda

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  • Shelby LShelby L (12/12/2008 9:23:00 AM)

    Another work of art. Its fantastic, keep up the great work. Looking forward to more of your writings.
    S.H.

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  • Kite Remedy (12/12/2008 3:27:00 AM)

    Mysterious yet interesting to read, that's great to know what inside of your love's mind..
    Beautiful writing..
    I like it more than much..

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  • Stacey Watts (12/11/2008 10:25:00 PM)

    Very beautifully written full of imagery. Great piece.

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  • Loyd C Taylor SrLoyd C Taylor Sr (12/11/2008 8:28:00 PM)

    Interestingg read, Loyd

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  • Tissa Calvert (12/11/2008 1:43:00 PM)

    very good way of putting love I couldn't do it better myself

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  • Meggie GultianoMeggie Gultiano (12/11/2008 5:28:00 AM)

    a beautiful write. thanks for the sharing

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