Men drink
And they do all nonsense.
They drink and talk rubbish
They drink and drive badly,
It is often fatal to others.
Men drink
And they get emotional and nervy,
They waste their time and quarrel with others.
Men drink
And then they squeal like swine,
They shout and bark at others.
But...
Most women can do all these
Without taking a drink!
This is just for fun Valsa madam and I shall stand for the women and their cause despite this poem that has pleasantly slipped through my pen.Be sober ever..
hahaha njoied ur write Sir.......MEn have to drink to do all this nonsense...for women everything comes so automatically....they are made like that by our Great God.......for all the physical and mental stress they go thru everyday, this comes as a way of removing their frustation.........hahaha
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! ! Dinesh, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, it can be so true at times! I do not take offense, it gave me pleasure for a moment! Ha Ha, you are a man after all! . Good to see you have a lighter side to you, in spite of all the nonsense men do! Men put women through all that stress after all - it's a wonder we don't all drink worse than the men! Ha Ha Ha. Great write, thank you for the joy! RoseAnn
Quiet interesting write especially from your pen. Thoughtful write especially in last stanza.. But.... I agree with Valsas comment and I too join with all the comments made here.
Your first three stanzas seem to be fine since you and I fall in that category. I have no comment about the last stanza.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are right Dinesh. Here I don't dare to differ from you. Somehow it is a relief that you haven't made a sweeping condemnation of all women.. But instead of 'most women' you could have said 'half the women'. I enjoyed your departure here from your highly serious tone to a rather comical light tone. But sad to see that a supporter of women has changed his stance all of a sudden!