Hugs Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Pleasing odor makes the day pleasant.. Good one

Nothing wrong with his hugs but his body odor? Oh, No.

The deodorant would make the hug much nicer.

An amazing poem. Enjoyed it

deodorant for frequent hugs!

This is definitely a senryu: it has that sharp, incisive line at the end! But I take it as a haiku: for I very much love hugs, more than kisses! Loved it!

Using deodorant is a fashion of modern civilization. This poem reflects clearly.

He should use a deodorant. Really i smiled when i finished reading this. lovely poem. tony