Saturday, January 20, 2024

Hypnotic Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The warmth of our bodies together is
What I remembered
When, the rain came, we lie there on the couch
Sleeping waiting for it to stop
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Jayne Louise Davies 20 January 2024

Top marks LeeAnn ***** TFS

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2024

This is a marvelous piece.... thank u, dear LeeAnn...

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 January 2024

Beautifully penned about the rainy night. Loved it. Nice share.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2024

A wonderful poem on bitter sweet love

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Nabakishore Dash 20 January 2024

Nicely written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 January 2024

Very romantic lines that linger in the mind and heart. Rain and its soft rhythm could evoke feelings and sentiments to some people. A beautiful poem well expressed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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