Hypothetical Person Poem by Aine Ni Leidhin

Hypothetical Person

Rating: 4.8


Sometimes sideways moving as the restless
spheres in the shadow of love lacked
the will to power forsaking the rejected
resolve in the garden of treasures unknown
rivers ran, measureless and yet, still
waters run deep as always
restless impulse to remake and redo.

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Greenwolfe 1962 12 September 2008

I suppose this is a description. But, of course, that would be hypothetical speculation on my part. No recommendfation here as I would not know whether it can be recommended or not. GW62

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David Desantis 21 April 2008

very nice....especially the 'garden of treasures', really good wording on this one

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Ivor Hogg 15 March 2008

Searching for truth one must accept working hypotheses as truth until more information becomes available

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Howard Johnson 13 March 2008

A most beautiful choice of words, easly a 10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 March 2008

hypothermical kind of writes................beautiful.

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