Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 150,974 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Hysteria - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The hearts crawling on each other,
Were satisfied and content,
But time was jealous and could not see,
The two innocents in love only love.
It started snatching the beauty of life,
One by one everything was gone,
Emotions were gone,
Sentiments were gone,
Passions were gone,
Understanding was gone.

The cruel age,
Coated a layer on everything,
A layer that needs a name,
Distances were increased,
The beloved when turned,
In a living hysteria,
The act was reacted,
And one day the lover,
Broke two glasses,
Were it merely the glasses,
Or the hearts were broken.

Many days gone,
Time started reverting,
They didn’t talk each other,
They are sleeping in different bed rooms,
The nature intervened,
And gave wings to the hearts,
With a bitter smile,
Asked the hearts to fly,
And to go back,
In her lovely arms,
For an unending sleep,
And the dreams unseen,
Well in advance,
Before the cruel time,
Manages to snatch,
The beauty of love!
(I started submitting my poems on 23rd of March,2014 but it was 22nd of March according to their time. Anyway, it’s my first birthday at PH, being celebrated alone with a poem you just read)

Topic(s) of this poem: growing old

Comments about Hysteria by Akhtar Jawad

  • (3/23/2015 2:54:00 PM)

    One of the Best poem I have ever seen.... Beautiful 10 on 10...., (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (3/23/2015 10:56:00 AM)

    In a short span of just one year, it is so laudable that you could compose over 400 beautiful poems on a variety of subjects! Let the ensuing years show even a bigger output! Wish you all the best! A great write on a relationship that was on the brink of collapse, but was saved at the right time! (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/23/2015 9:58:00 AM)

    Time marches on relentlessly we have to make sure we keep moving forward in a positive way to get the most out of life! Beautifully written with as always your great creativity painting stunning images! Congrats on your 1st year in PH! (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (3/22/2015 10:57:00 PM)

    What an emotional outpour.it is the curse of the advancement of time.we have to overcome all and move with destiny. We are a family here in PH.Never feel alone. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Mantu Mahakul (3/22/2015 9:38:00 PM)

    And to go back,
    In her lovely arms,
    For an unending sleep,
    And the dreams unseen...' Wonderful drafting really shared here with touching words. Wonderful imagery.
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  • Kelly Kurt (3/22/2015 9:06:00 PM)

    A touching poem. Thank you for sharing. Happy 1st year. You are not alone. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

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