A Pain Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

A Pain

Rating: 4.3


Noiseless break of nerves
You find many life curves
Little you speak but
Never you speak it.

Try is what you try
To feel free as tree
Tree of forest and street
Free at one lonely at another.

Expressing it is never done
Till the date I swear never
Everything happens patiently
Indeed happens noiseless.

Blood and breath, life and death
Hi and hello, bye and good bye
Gets one and becomes two
Me and myself

A Pain
Sunday, September 18, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Carl 14 March 2012

Good poem I like it... you should read and comment on my few poems about suffering, pain, and depression.

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Amartya Kalapahar 20 September 2011

Very nicely written.

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Ponniah Ganeshan 21 September 2011

Life is like that. No one can escape from pain and you have to face it. Good poem.

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Mansoor - 26 September 2011

your poem is good but I think it is a bit perplexing. Try to express your Idea a little more illustrative and commonly.

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Amir Forougi 27 September 2011

Very highly expressive poem well rhymed...

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Marvin Brato 13 December 2017

Meaningful piece...10.

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Apurva Jain 21 July 2012

lovely........! ! ! ! ! ! ! : D

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Ramesh Rai 15 June 2012

Tree of forest and street Free at one lonely at another.

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Joshua Crumpton 22 April 2012

Great poem, nice choice of words

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Sossi Khachadourian 26 March 2012

Blood and breath, life and death yes that's the real life my friend! ! 1 Good poem i like it!

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