I Am Sun Rising In Your Sky Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

I Am Sun Rising In Your Sky

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I know you are powerful
By your command I rise
I am sun with rays more
To light humanity I come
I know you support me
Moon borrows light sure
To do the same task here
Moon follows my path
While I take rest at night
To light another side I dream
In reality moon lights
Calmness blooms at night,
While day darkness passes
I rise again in your sky
I swim with light wings
From East to West I reach
Birds sing and welcome
Twice they do this duty
I feel this prayer and sing
Before you I too bow twice
Oh dear super power you feel
You know everything I tell
I am sun rising in your sky
By grace you have gifted me.

Saturday, October 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual,sun,sunrise
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about sun and rising. Sun here prays before God, the super power thanking about creation and agrees that duty to humanity is to give light always. Sun feels God's grace and wonderful gift of sky. This is the theme in nutshell. This poem is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lubinda Lubinda 11 October 2015

Great poem about the sun. God blesses us with sunlight every day. I like the way you present it in this poem. I enjoyed reading it!

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Daniel Brick 05 October 2015

What a wonderful poem of gratitude! Your description of the sun doing its work of illumination is brilliant just like the light streaming from it. Your words create a whole new, imaginative solar system whose energy and beauty you bring to earth, put into this poem and share with us your readers. I feel both heat and illumination from your sun.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Superb....Wonderful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2015

I know you support me; with the muse of creation in the hands of the Creator. Nice piece.

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Lyn Paul 03 October 2015

To light humanity I come A beautiful flow of words penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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