'I Am' Woman ***series #5 Poem by louis rams

'I Am' Woman ***series #5

Rating: 5.0


'i am' woman.
'i am ' like the earth.
from me you take all the good.

i give you treasure
i give you pleasure

mans goal in life is to take my flower.
i will give you 'the time and hour'.

i will give you what you need to survive.
and i will tell you if you are mine.

'i am' woman.
and you seek me out in every location
for i can give you the greatest sensation.

' i am' woman
i can get you to love me
or to hate me
but! you will not forsake me.
you will do as i command
for i have you in my hand.

so as the earth, treat me with
kindness and respect
and i will let you taste the forbidden fruit
that you so desire
to quench that rising fire.

' i am ' WOMAN.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 07 April 2009

I love the strength you have show a woman to have here and all that she bares. Great write again Louis, 10++

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Sandra Fowler 02 April 2009

A strong endorsement of the important role of women. Artful play on words.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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a very true write..she is a treasure and pleasure

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got some good aspects of woman down. I liek the series compilation

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 April 2009

so as the earth, treat me with kindness and respect and i will let you taste the forbidden fruit................. lines sums up all..........Good Write....10+++............

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