I And Herons! Poem by Sandhya S.N

I And Herons!

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I and Herons are alike
Not in our outer crust
But in our awesome thoughts!
In our greedy madly longs

Both are in ascetic mood!
Longing for a great aspire
Don't U see us looking at?
The clear sky; a lot more time

They are calmly waiting for
The feathery touch of dripping rain
Which makes them cool and sensitive
Both the in and outward crust

But I am madly waiting for
The warming promises, he gives
Though I feel it neurotic;
I will do so as long as
He gets time for me also..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yana Djin 13 March 2009

I love this poem. beautiful and precise. not overly sentimental and piercing.

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Zachary Clark 10 March 2009

Falling falling falling I am stuck in this poem of your my first favorite 0on the site good job!

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premji premji 09 March 2009

But I am madly waiting for The warming promises, he gives Though I feel it neurotic;

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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