I And I Poem by mehedi faysal

such a beautiful and romantic poem-love flowing smoothly right to the end +10 regards anjalie (read mine ARE U THERE)

My 10 with it for the following wonderful lines- 'So I love to confined in you In life & death Love your hollow promises Eager accept the fate.'

Not much I can say about this other than great poetic assets were put into this poem. Since the emotions described in this poem I personally do not care for; I'm glad you do. It's a nine.

Hey Faysal, Very good write, as I see your motions, and know your feelings upon your beloved one. No matter she is standing up in front of you, or laying down, you feel so happy just in front of her even she is sleeping. There in the last paragraph..So I love to confined (wrong with..ed) should be confine. All in a whole is very fine...I give you 10.

it begins with romanticism cascading over rungs of color bu it ends with eloquence of poignance by the prayer, overall qite smooching across the texture, yet ingenious with imagery, well penned,10, thanks for

Very beautifully one. Flows smoothly, capture interest as u go from one piece of the poem to the next.

'I think love is an unholy Goddess. Turned the silence in to pain I see sin in your eye. May be in love pleasure and pain All are the same.', really like this part and very well written faysal. nice work ill say 10

I like how a reader can really get into the peice, it leaves a sort of awe. I gave you a ten. Very nice work.

...'in love pleasure and pain all are the same'... liked this line...duality...in thoughts...in personality...thoughts crowding over words...a good attempt, faysal...9... thanks for inviting me to read...come to my inbox...

Don't just write for yourself, please write for readers of your poems. I like that part of the poem most wherein you have observed your lover. If I give you a 9 you may become satisfied. Keep on trying to improve. So 8.