I Believe Poem by Jim Butler

It's sweet. It sounds like a kids voice. I like the way it flows, simple, objective, well written with a great message.

There is a deep meaning in your poem, but it seems like you're using quotes from different people. What idea struck you when you wrote this? Was there something intellectual hidden away in the seeds of your words? ^.^ Good job, though. P. S. There are a few believes that need to be spaced apart because they're not matching the same layout scheme as the rest.

I dig... great message

that was inspirational! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! haha im hyper but i really like your poem... :)

I agree! I enjoyed looking at someone else who had an uplifting poem that has good morals. Great! : -)

We believe alike then! ! Its good that us 'good' people have such good morals :) GO US! ! Simply beautiful!

jimmy u could melt a girl's heart with ur poems. i dont know why you dont like writing them.. i love it

The repetition grabs the reader and gains their interest. Also love the different sizes of stanzas. I truly love this poem.

“That a smile can mean more than anything to anyone” Do you know how many times I’ve felt crummy only to have you come up to me and give me a smile? It’s a beautiful side of you… I like the repetition; also, having a longer last stanza makes it more meaningful, especially when followed by the shorter first stanzas.

Jim! Your poem was great. You are an example of what you write. I love the pure and simple message.