I Believed You Poem by Arielle Friese

Wow, sure is very bleak (not a bad thing though(. Well written.

really an interesting poem. great ideas in young age itself.........good work.......

Hearts are broken when some words are unspoken... you spoke your heart in your poem... hope you find a quick-fixer soon.. it was nice to read... keep up the good work: -)

its more often the case.. that one heart loves the other more...it fixes..but i think will always hurt if it was true love... your pain is described and felt...my empathy is yours

wow nice i like it keep it up: +)

ohh really an amazing poem....i loved it

loved it real good love how you worded it

A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic

A great write. You know how to describe the broken, torn heart well. We've all been there, but you put it into words...fantastic

nice poem..........i like it