Rain ...

hello Rain you have a writing ability keep on expressing yourself

Never think u are a loser like u said in poem, I know sometimes we are badly falling in worse condition but we build the real life from this scratches.. What beautiful in life u can get is to understand ur power n try to use your abilities to create greater n better life, for u and others.. Be like the real rain it not a loser when it fall and hit the ground because it will up again as a tall tree_soul

Learn to overcome the initial disappointments and sleep well! Your first postings assure the emergence of a good poet in future! Keep writing! ! All the best! !