Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Monday, November 12, 2012

I Can'T Believe In Love Anymore Comments

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You have made me cry by means of love
You have made my happy life so tough

I can't find my sea of sorrow's shore
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Asif Andalib
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Far Lapenna 18 November 2012

It really made my heart clench.... Great imagery, keep it up :)

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Ken Kerr 17 November 2012

Hello Asif Well done...another good poem...thanks for your kind remarks on 'Words on Fire'. Best Ken

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 15 November 2012

a sorrow lines, really sad. hope u believe monce ore in love

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Sky Welch 14 November 2012

Interesting choice of topic. Normally guys don't choose love anymore.

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Caroline Bulleck 12 November 2012

This is a beautiful, sad piece overflowing with emotion and pain. It has a great message and is well written. I like it. And never give up on love. If you can't find it, let it find you. :)

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Michael Chavinda 12 November 2012

Very touching I must say! I have a few technical issues with it but otherwise it's a good write and good read!

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Jahan Zeb 12 November 2012

This is really something Asif Sir. You treat love well I mean love poems. The rhythm is good and their is a good rhymes to the lines as well. Well done. Keep writing

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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