I Can'T Believe In Love Anymore Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

I Can'T Believe In Love Anymore



You have made me cry by means of love
You have made my happy life so tough

I can't find my sea of sorrow's shore
Everything makes me sad makes me bore

You come in my thoughts I can't ignore
Now I can't dance like I danced before
Oh you have made me feel like a whore

I can't believe in love anymore
You have locked my dream's every door

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about a girl who was dumped by her lover. Now she doesn't trust anyone.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahan Zeb 12 November 2012

This is really something Asif Sir. You treat love well I mean love poems. The rhythm is good and their is a good rhymes to the lines as well. Well done. Keep writing

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Michael Chavinda 12 November 2012

Very touching I must say! I have a few technical issues with it but otherwise it's a good write and good read!

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Far Lapenna 18 November 2012

It really made my heart clench.... Great imagery, keep it up :)

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Ken Kerr 17 November 2012

Hello Asif Well done...another good poem...thanks for your kind remarks on 'Words on Fire'. Best Ken

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 15 November 2012

a sorrow lines, really sad. hope u believe monce ore in love

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Sky Welch 14 November 2012

Interesting choice of topic. Normally guys don't choose love anymore.

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Caroline Bulleck 12 November 2012

This is a beautiful, sad piece overflowing with emotion and pain. It has a great message and is well written. I like it. And never give up on love. If you can't find it, let it find you. :)

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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