I Can'T Seem To Be Honest Poem by mona martinez

I Can'T Seem To Be Honest

Rating: 4.8


yeah, i want to be honest,
yeah, we told each other everything,
i just can't seem to be honest,
when how i feel,
is more than a friend level,
i want there to be more between us,
i feel the connection when we talk,
i just can't handle,
that i'm not your girl,
i'm an emotional chick,
most guys don't know,
i may come off as strong,
but, that only because people don't know me,
now there not a thing i hide,
about the way i feel about you,
i guess in a way,
i feel so much better,
i no longer have to watch what i say,
there really are no secerts between us,
i just don't know why i seen it as a bad thing.
Copyright © 2009
8-10-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 17 August 2009

Wow! Mona need not use more words to express yourself..ya lines are written with such frankness of every true feel..that wonderfully is beautiful...... Winnie

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Hey you says lot through your poems.. I like the part where you say you are an emotional chick....... nice one my dear emotional lady..(hey I kinda posted a song.. felt it didn't quite go with the poem, so deleted it..) good.. love shan/// take care Mona

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Graham Russell 12 August 2009

what it should be between two people in love no secrets in between.

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rago rago 12 August 2009

personal but prolific................

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