Today I choose to rise
like a strong mountain
Leaving my bed of demise
Never will I again be shaken
Of hope and courage, a million rays
have opened my eyes
and strenthened my bones
So come hell or high water
I've become a fortified tower
Your poem leads you to positivity You know and want to rise from a failure and pain Very nice.
As you choose to rise, you pass a message to those who opt to be otherwise. They are dejected and pessimistic often.Your will power is going to be quite detrimental. I appreciate the diction, the rendering and your grooming poetic talent. All the best Jr.Cuyam.
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A different and strong poem, with inspiring thoughts, 'For I was made in the image of greatness'. Marvellous.
From what I have read so far, this is your best poem, in my opinion. 'I can do greater things'-this is the true spirit of a poet.
It is a poem of great determination having stunning and touching expression. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A strong poem from the heart.