I Choose To Rise Poem by JR Cuyam

I Choose To Rise

Rating: 4.8


Today I choose to rise
like a strong mountain
Leaving my bed of demise
Never will I again be shaken
Of hope and courage, a million rays
have opened my eyes
and strenthened my bones
So come hell or high water
I've become a fortified tower

Tuesday, October 1, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,risen,courage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 02 October 2013

A strong poem from the heart.

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Sam Smith 01 October 2013

I liked your last stanza. i´m a man of happy endings.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 October 2013

Your poem leads you to positivity You know and want to rise from a failure and pain Very nice.

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Dinesan Madathil 01 October 2013

As you choose to rise, you pass a message to those who opt to be otherwise. They are dejected and pessimistic often.Your will power is going to be quite detrimental. I appreciate the diction, the rendering and your grooming poetic talent. All the best Jr.Cuyam.

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A B Faniki 02 February 2020

A inspiring piece. Great write my dear poet

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Sarah Shahzad 05 December 2019

Absolutely brilliant a fantastic piece of writing.. pls pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my to..

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Michael Walker 08 July 2019

A different and strong poem, with inspiring thoughts, 'For I was made in the image of greatness'. Marvellous.

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Michael Walker 11 July 2019

From what I have read so far, this is your best poem, in my opinion. 'I can do greater things'-this is the true spirit of a poet.

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Sochukwu Ivye 08 November 2017

A magnificient piece.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 August 2017

It is a poem of great determination having stunning and touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

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