I Created A World Of Nothing Poem by Shaun Cronick

I Created A World Of Nothing

Rating: 5.0


I created a world of nothing,
To escape this plane of reality.
Leaving all firm substance behind,
Of its problems I'm finally free.

I'm king of my own domain,
This dimension of my mind design.
I come and go as I please,
In nothingness with no borderline.

In my endless land of nothing,
I only see what I want to see.
With no obstacles to surmount,
Where nothing never worries me.

Sunday, December 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: escape,nothing,surreal,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 December 2020

A well penned poem..... Truly excellent and delightful....5 stars*****

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Dominic Windram 13 December 2020

Very interesting, highly original poem Shaun. In some ways it reminds me of John Lennon's Nowhere Man. The following quote from A Mid Summer Night's Dream (Act V, Scene 1) also springs to mind: ...I'm paraphrasing here: '... the poet's pen/ Turns unknown things to shapes and gives to airy nothing/A local habitation and a name.' You are definitely in good company here Shaun! Consequently, it's a phantsamgorical five from me! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 13 December 2020

We all need a place where we can escape...5/5

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Thank you good Rose Marie for your most kind comment and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Thank you Kostas for your kind comment and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Thank you Dominic for your kind comment and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Thank you Bernard for your kind comment and take care.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 December 2020

Our mind is powerful. We can create our own world where we can be its ruler. A great imaginative poem so beautifully crafted by a one of a kind Poet. Five Stars! ! ! ! ! To my Poem List.

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