Kristin Nicole RothDavis
Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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(((((I Don'T Need Your Hand Anymore)))))

Rating: 3.5

I don’t need your hand anymore
You’ve made me strong
I am put here where I belong
You may not see the one light in me
Slipping away from your grip
Oh’ please just let me be free

I’ll never forget the moments you’ve saved me
All the days that you gave me breath
Reckoning with the devil

On my knees, praying for my life
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An awesome work that exemplifies & amplifies th' true literary & real life definition of PASSION & FORTITUDE.....Both of which have & always will be a part of your life, Kris, and are two of the most crucial virtues that will enable you to stand alone &if you so desire & take the victory, solo....BUT never, ever be under any mis-impression that you have to be standing alone...Because that will never be th' case....Beam me up, Poetess K.....YOU DO ROCK, & I MEAN 'R O C K'! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR.(aka: frankster/frankie.j

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Patricia Gale 15 October 2006

A write filled with strength and determination to make it. Independent. A hand to hold sometimes makes the falls of life a little easier

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Heather Wilkins 28 August 2013

a great read. a request to take it alone. written with a lot of strength

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Utter acceptance.. a breathless, yet calming and serene, accepting read. Wonderful, K. t x

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Ernestine Northover 16 October 2006

This is so sweet and moving Kristin, a wonderful prayer, and a wonderful read. A lovely write from your talented hand. Love and prayers to you from me. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Tailor Bell 15 October 2006

heartfelt request and desire for maneuvering space, room to breath...sometimes difficult to ask of those nearest. strong work. -Tailor B.

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An awesome work that exemplifies & amplifies th' true literary & real life definition of PASSION & FORTITUDE.....Both of which have & always will be a part of your life, Kris, and are two of the most crucial virtues that will enable you to stand alone &if you so desire & take the victory, solo....BUT never, ever be under any mis-impression that you have to be standing alone...Because that will never be th' case....Beam me up, Poetess K.....YOU DO ROCK, & I MEAN 'R O C K'! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR.(aka: frankster/frankie.j

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