I Give Up! ! ! Poem by Shreej k.c

I Give Up! ! !

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I try to breathe but end up in deep sighs
I try to point out but ignore like the blind eyes
I try to unleash but get tangled in unbreakable chain
I try to endure but get stabbed with excruciating pain
I try to revive but then…I give up!

I always get one for you but you look for the other
I move to erase the distance but you ran further
I hope to explain you but you challenge my dignity
I approach to hear you but you pose your insanity
I think of rebelling but then…I give up! !

I wish to smell the fragrance but get pricked by the thorn
I wish to rejoice but get forced to mourn
I wish to taste the sweetness but get stung by the bee
I wish to enjoy the sunny beach but get drowned into the sea
I wish to soar high in the sky but then…I give up! !

I try to solve but get fed up with fruitless toil
I try to escape but get caught in endless turmoil
I try to ease, I try to cure
I try to ignore, I try to endure
I try every way and then…I give up! ! !

(Giving up makes me a free bird again...)

Sunday, March 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Its a poem i wrote some yrs ago. I don't even remember what triggered me to write this one! I added the last line recently though.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akachukwu Lekwauwa 20 June 2016

a lovely piece really. no hesitation....

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Shreej K.c 20 June 2016

Thank you Akachukwu :)

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Bernard Snyder 18 June 2016

Sometimes...there's nothing else to do! Beautiful poetry!

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Shreej K.c 20 June 2016

True that! Thank you :)

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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

I try to solve but get fed up with fruitless toil I try to escape but get caught in endless turmoil I try to ease, I try to cure I try to ignore, I try to endure I try every way and then…I give up! ! ! Beautiful line.. caught in endless turmoil. Thanks for it.10 for the poem.

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Shreej K.c 20 June 2016

Thank you so much.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

I always get one for you but you look for the other I move to erase the distance but you ran further I hope to explain you but you challenge my dignity I approach to hear you but you pose your insanity I think of rebelling but then…I give up! ! love this beautiful stanza. good poem.

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Shreej K.c 20 June 2016

Thank you Seema :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 June 2016

congratulations, dear KC! ;) a friendly hug from Tuscany! :)

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Shreej K.c 20 June 2016

Thank you Dr. Fabrizio! Proud to be a part of the Frosini group of poets ;) a warm Namaste from Nepal :)

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