*** I Got The Blues For You *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** I Got The Blues For You ***

Rating: 4.6

Pelican blues, jay walking on velvet souls
Somber and detach, mayhem
Pickering the night of pre dawn
The choir of your anger, screaming
In tune to the decaying sounds
Of the strings Silverado
Ascending in D Minor
Descending in G Major
Flavor never a waiver
Impacts……….heart raptures
“Come and sway with me, ” the voices say
“Absorb my tone, within the tone,
You’ll hear the grumble mumble”
Sudden death and numb
The rhythm retires
The blues in dire
What come next will be your desperados
Attach the strings to your yester hellos
Soulful revival
My guitar humbles
The plucking and strumming
Erode…….to your gravely swing

Jake Brgr 02 December 2008

Wow this is extreamly good. I got a little lost in the words themselves, but it carried me away for a moment. I applaud you. -Brgr

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Izik Alcox 02 December 2008

very interesting read, great flow and feel, A1

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Za Italian Buffon 02 December 2008

well it seems so blue from over here nicely expressed

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Chelsea Force 02 December 2008

The poem was absolutely beautiful, full of flow. And the musical touch added to the tone in such a significant way. Keep up the excellent work.

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asma Jone 03 December 2008

Such an great way written, amazing, wish i can write like that it's just...WOW beautiful

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 04 February 2009

this one of my faves! ! ! ! u laid out deetails 4 the reader to picture it! ! ! this is awesome

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Melvina Germain 14 January 2009

Ouch! ! ! ! ! ! Fantastic Sulaiman, you are on a roll, this poem is filled with fire, burning within the soul.

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Amrutesh T.Radhakrishnan 09 December 2008

vry well written.you deserve a definite 10++++

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George Bernard-bloody-shaw 06 December 2008

Please, for simplicity, keep your words in C, G, F or B flat..... George

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George Bernard-bloody-shaw 06 December 2008

Musician to musician, music to my ears. I also like playing words, as you do. George

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