I Lie All Alone Poem by Alexie Whitman

I Lie All Alone

Rating: 5.0

The thoughts of you have succumbed me

And I wish you could just hug me and embrace me
I want to hear you say my name
But that pleasure has been taken away
I lie here all alone
Still wondering some day you'll come along
To soothe the pain that lies deep under me
Because as I close my eyes "your smile" is all I see
I want you to hold my hand
And go for a long walk and play in the sand
Your consoling words made my heart race
But now I am alone and tears trickle down my face
Did you know how much you meant to me?
I think not, because you left me hanging in between
Between the choice of begging you to come back
Or just letting you go
So I turned my back towards you
And forgot those amazing stories
We had something that major friends didn't have
And now that you are gone silence is all I have
You wiped my tears when I was sad
And danced with me when I was glad
Why did you have to be an important part of my life?
Why couldn't you just betray me like everyone else?
I hear your voice in deep silences
Telling me to get up and bring you back
But I am too stubborn and full of ego to say sorry
So, I lie here all alone, dreaming of you and I
When we were high among the stars without a worry!

Sunday, October 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,loneliness,lost love,sad
Sometimes, you don't realize what you have lost at the moment but soon you feel their absence. Few months ago, I started getting minor anxiety attacks because I had realized that I had lost the most important person in my life. But I never had anyone to talk to about my insecurities and anxiety. So, I talked to myself and appreciated me....trust me, it really helped me get over my anxiety attacks and now I am all happy and full of life!
Arb Rudi 25 December 2020

I love it!

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Dev Poet 17 October 2020

Beautiful I can relate

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 October 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Alexie Whitman. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 13 October 2020

The complication of realationships, the sorrow of absence, the hope, the srength. All depicted in a wonderful poetiv way.5 stars

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Rajnish Manga 11 October 2020

This is so heart touching and sad but reassuring too. Soulmates are not many. That is why his or her absence is so badly felt. Thanks for the poem and the Notes.

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