'I Listened' Poem by Bernard Snyder

'I Listened'

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You said I would never succeed
nor did I possess what it took,
you said I wasn't smart enough to comprehend
much less write a book,
you said I wouldn't amount to anything
and my 'idea of success' was all wrong,
you said my dreams were too farfetched
and that, I'd never write a hit song,
well, I sat and listen as you criticized me
but I kept my head towards the sky
and prayed that when I become successful,
you'd be able to look me in the eye,
I've since written over a thousand songs
at least 'half' will be 'top hits'
so I wonder has your perception of me changed
now that I'm filthy rich!

Wednesday, February 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: smart,success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Brown 30 April 2020

It's good to be able to get out from under all the worlds negativity, a wonderful place if you don't let the naysayers get you down. Good poem

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Guy Lip-more 10 August 2013

You told them friend, very good write.

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