'Why I Love You'

Rating: 3.9

I love you because you're the other half
that makes me whole,
when we're apart
I feel helpless and out of control,
when we're together united as one,
you make me feel I can reach out
and wrap my arms around the sun,
when I'm with you
I don't feel any sense of pressure,
I'm completely secure
and I feel very, very special,
and if that isn't enough
to answer why I love you so,
I can easily write another page
but I would hate to ruin the flow.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 10 September 2014

a good write on love feelings. your the other half that makes me whole excellent

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2011

'when I'm with you I don't feel any sense of pressure, I'm completely secure' RAB

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 29 September 2011

i love your expressions really it gets in. superb

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Romeo Della Valle 07 September 2011

Fabulous! A heart touching love confession that clearly shows your great passion and feelings! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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M Asim Nehal 24 June 2016

Nice way to say why I love you, Congrats for the Poem of the day by member.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

the half I'm always indeed everywhere I've come here to fulfill myself cause I know the another half is you o love/// beautiful loving expression

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Sochukwu Ivye 03 October 2017

A God-inspired piece of love and peace of mind. Beautiful.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 August 2016

cancerians make lovely lovers most cancerians are like lovely women warm hearted apart from that.....

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

A nice love poem. The flow is fluent and natural. Congratulations, Bernard, on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! Well done!

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Rajnish Manga 24 June 2016

Love is such a wonderful feeling that makes all the difference in a relationship. Thanks, Bernard. when we're apart / I feel helpless and out of control, when I'm with you / I'm completely secure / and I feel very, very special,

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